VISION: 5/5; The style of the art itself looks very much appealing, and the monochrome style you'd find in most mangas only adds to this fact.
ORIGINALITY: 4/5; Your OC reminds me of a certain kind of person everyone's probably seen before. Plus, you should really give a description about her. What kind of personalities does she have? What are her likes/dislikes? What kind of character bio does she have? Some of us would like to know.
TECHNIQUE: 4.5/5; With the exception of a character bio, your skills to draw this character are very well-done.
IMPACT: 4.5/5; Though some may demand that you give a bio about your OC, they may still praise you for your professional drawing skills. Nicely done.